Saturday, March 13, 2010

Editted story of Rabbit and Tortoise

Retold this childhood story by a young friend of mine , I was laughing and in the same time thinking how creative he is...

So the Rabbit wanted to race with the Tortoise right ?
Well , the orginal setting of the story was at a long straight path...but now it has another two settings , one at the sea and another at the mountain...
The race started at the path , which , the Tortoise was in the lead , as you know...
Then , the Tortoise has to climb up the mountain , this is the time where Rabbit raced pass Tortoise. When came the time to go down the mountain , the Tortoise made himself into a ball and rolled downhill...This made him the lead again. The final setting was at the sea , which the finishing line was . The Rabbit was faster than the Tortoise to reach the seaside...We know that rabbits can't swim...but being a rabbit himself , the Rabbit didn't know that...He tried to dip his legs into the water but he realised he was sinking...He quickly redrawed his legs and waited for Tortoise to arrive...When the Tortoise reached there , the first sentence that came out for his mouth is , ' How come you're still here ?' The Rabbit answered : ' I'm arfaid of water...' Tortoise took a look at the water and then turned to Rabbit , ' Well then , bye , I'm going down now...' In went the Tortoise and he reached the finishing line without the arrogant Rabbit by his side...

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